Beautiful. Your detailed descriptions are so inviting, so tempting. I can feel those blades of grass and that last line, "sleepwalking amongst the grace." That's where I want to be.
Thank you, Veronika. Yes, I find in writing I repeat some things and it can be frustrating—but there’s a reason for that I think, and yes for sure, a promising solution! Meanwhile, I will be excited to see your new writing when you get back at it!
Oh so thoroughly, hauntingly beautiful.
It really is 🧡
Thank you!
"A century of thought burdens my fingers and bargains with my tongue"
Love this depiction of the burden of the centuries bargaining with the tongue to come to the surface.
Thanks, Will!
Love the image of running barefoot, only the sound of the loon. Wow.
Thank you, Teyani!
Beautiful. Your detailed descriptions are so inviting, so tempting. I can feel those blades of grass and that last line, "sleepwalking amongst the grace." That's where I want to be.
Thank you, Steve—your appreciation for my writing always shines a light within my day and I am grateful you’re here.
Always my pleasure.
This is just amazing. I love it. "On a breath of a thousand nights..."
Thank you, LeeAnn!
Despairingly — beautiful in the wakefulness of hope.
Thank you, Simone!
As powerful wake-up call!
Thanks, Stan!
Beautiful! I love walking barefoot on grass except when I step on a snake. I did this last week in my yard. 😬
Thank you, Charlotte! Oh, yeah I wouldn’t like that either! Thanks for being here, sure do appreciate you!
i want to be there beside the marsh with you
We can go together and listen to the song of the loon! Thanks for being here, Elizabeth!
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This ...."I find myself overwhelmed with the affair—consummated with generations of remembering."... captures a familiar experience.
"sleepwalking amongst the grace." sounds like a promising solution to the dilemma.
Thank you, Veronika. Yes, I find in writing I repeat some things and it can be frustrating—but there’s a reason for that I think, and yes for sure, a promising solution! Meanwhile, I will be excited to see your new writing when you get back at it!
will be back soon 💕
I am an outsider upon the flesh of the Earth, a gypsy amongst the congregation and vanish within the revelation.
This!!!!!! I've never seen existence more perfectly described! Bravo, Jess!
Thank you, Aaron—sure appreciate you and your kindness.
Bless you! I think we’re all sleepwalking our way home. 🙏❤️
Thank you, Jamie. Bless you too. Yes, for sure!❤️
Pure poetry.
Enchanting and moving!
Thank you, Leon!
Thank you, as always!
Thank you, Paul!